Takahiro Tomura

Takahiro,

The top version is your original and the bottom version is the corrected version:


He is 18 years old and he moved to new york from Australia.
He has been living long island because he wants to work at wine vineyard. His dream is to be making vineyard. So he was studying getting vine knowledge and finance management to sell wine.

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He is 18 years old and he moved to New York from Australia.
He has been living on Long Island because he wants to work at a wine vineyard. His dream is to make a vineyard. So he was studying to get vine knowledge and finance management to sell wine.

Iwona .Homework 10.23.10

Dorota,

The original version of your story is above and the correction is under it.

This story is about my frend Dorota.
Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very yang aworked in many places not being able to warm up the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school evenings at college that she could realize her plans.After a few years it managed to get a job at a law firm.Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains, but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and beginning to understand her skills.Now Dorothy is 30 years old, runs his own lawyer kncelarie.
story of my friend, it motivates me to work and self-confidence.

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This story is about my friend Dorota.

Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very young and worked in many places, not being able to warm up to the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school in the evenings at college so that she could realize her plans. After a few years she managed to get a job at a law firm. Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains (I don't understand "well plantains), but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and she began to develop her skills. Now Dorothy is 30 years old and runs her own lawyer firm.
The story of my friend motivates me to work and have self-confidence.

KONRAD, "Hubert's story"

Konrad, the corrected version of your writing is below your original. In fact, the writing was 99% correct.

Hubert was born in a very poor family in Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why, he decided to get some education and study hard.

After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.

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Hubert was born in a very poor family in the Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to the USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to the emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why he decided to get some education and study hard.

After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.

MARIA CRUZ - HOMEWORK OCT 30 2.010

Maria,

Under your original story about your friend Camila, there is a corrected version.



Camila is a nice girl who was born in Colombia.

She came to New York with her mother, five years ago. During the time she has lived in New York her first four years, she lived in Up State N.Y. and the last one in Bay side N.Y.

When she came she studied in a nice school and her most difficult class was the English. Now Camila has learned the English very well no perfect but your score is the highest in her class.

Camila is going to the High School and your dream is to study Architecture, she is taking classes of photography and design and she says that love them.


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Camila is a nice girl who was born in Colombia.

She came to New York with her mother five years ago. During the time she has lived in New York her first four years, she has lived in upstate N.Y. and recently in Bay side N.Y.

When she came she studied in a nice school and her most difficult class was English. Now Camila has learned English very well- not perfectly, but her score is the highest in her class.

Camila is going to high School and her dream is to study architecture. She is taking photography and design classes and she says that love them.

Luis Guamanzara

Luis, there are some corrections here. The top is your original. Under it, is the corrected version.

Jorge was born in Ecuador,he came to New York in 1990.He was very young when he
stared to work,he works very hard,he knows how the people work in factories,in
the camp of the construction and also knows how to work in roofing etc.

After starting school that change his life. Now he knows different people and
several better jobs. Finally he has an important position in the Union of
Labors.


This is my example for me, i am trying to make it here. learning English for a
future most prosperous for me and my family


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Jorge was born in Ecuador. He came to New York in 1990.He was very young when he
started to work. He works very hard and he knows how the people work in factories,in
construction camps and also knows how to work in roofing etc.

After starting school, his life changed. Now he knows different people and
several better jobs. Finally, he has an important position in a labor union.


This is my example for me. I am trying to make it here, learning English for a
future more prosperous for me and my family.

jessica

Jessica, the corrected version of your writing is under your original writing.

Your story is very affecting. Thank you for telling it.



I want to talk about my frien Tina.
I meeted Tina in 2005 when I arraived to New York in my father's house, She was living ther. Every night we liked talk about the life, her life.
Tina had a veautiful life when she was young living whit her mother, how die befor she married, but when she was filling in love, her life changed complitly. the man whit Tina was married chests to her for a few year them they were divorced, they losed everyting, Tina had to sleep dawn the bridge for a few weeks. Them she found to her friend how help her a lot.
leiter tina founds a good job taking care to people.everithing was ok but, one day she fells illness whit her asma and her weight more her deprecion it was the reazon for why she pass a wey in 2009.
now she is happy next to her mom. Tina was a bery nice person.


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I want to talk about my friend Tina.
I met Tina in 2005 when I arrived in New York in my father's house. She was living there. Every night we liked to talk about life, her life.

Tina had a beautiful life when she was young living with her mother, who died before she married, but when she was falling in love her life changed completely. The man with whom Tina was married cheated on her for a few years, and then they were divorced. They lost everything. Tina had to sleep under a bridge for a few weeks. Then she found her friend who helped her a lot.

Later Tina found a good job taking care of people. Everything was okay, but one day she fell ill with her asthma and she lost a lot of weight. That was the reason why she passed away in 2009.

Now she is happy next to her mom. Tina was a very nice person.

Riccardo's writing

Riccardo, this is the corrected version:

This is the story of a young man. His name is Mark Sanchez. Mark was a quarterback from the University of Southern California (USC). He wanted to be a professional football player and came to the New York Jets last year. As a rookie he did a good job, but this year he is doing great so far. The only problem for him is this: He got into using steroids to get more muscles and be more strong, because as a quarterback you receive a lot of impact to your body. But that is the price some peoples have to pay to be rich and famous.

JHON AGUDELO HOMEWORK FOR SATURDAY OCTOBER 30 2010

Jhon, I have posted the corrected version of your writing under your original (the word most people use is "brewery," although "beer factory" is not incorrect.


Hello teacher!

I am going to write you about a friend of mine.

His name is John Fredy. He lives in Medellin Colombia. He was born in 1970. He is one of my best friends, so to say, the best one. He was almost all the study years with me, more o less 7 or 8 years together.

He introduced all his family to me. They are so special with every body. His father has been so nice with me, and his mother has been so kind with me too. His father is a photographer and his mother is a house keeping. My friend has a sister too, she is married and she takes care of her kids. She has four kids, two men and two women. His sister is younger than my friend but she began so young to have kids.

My friend John Fredy is working as an electrician technic in a factory that produces beer (brewery or beer factory. I don't know what of those two words are better) named Bavaria or Pilsen. They sell one of the best beers at Colombia country. My friend enjoys working there and he is so happy with that kind of job.

In this moment, John Fredy is single but he has a girlfriend and he told me, at the beginning of this year, that he was thinking on get married at the end of December of this year. I said congratulations to him because of that decision and I would like to be in his wedding but I think that I am not going to have money to go to Colombia because I am so new here in this country and I don’t have a job to gain money and can go to my country and being with my friend in his marriage.

Ok teacher, this is a short story about my best friend John Fredy. I hope you like it and correct my mistakes in writing.

Thanks for all your help with my learning of the English language.
God bless you and have a good day.

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Hello teacher!

I am going to write you about a friend of mine.

His name is John Fredy. He lives in Medellin Colombia. He was born in 1970. He is one of my best friends, so to say, the best one. He was with me almost all the student years, more or less 7 or 8 years together.

He introduced all his family to me. They are so special with everybody. His father has been so nice to me, and his mother has been so kind to me too. His father is a photographer and his mother is a housekeeper. My friend has a sister too; she is married and she takes care of her kids. She has four kids, two men and two women. His sister is younger than my friend but she began to have kids so young.

My friend John Fredy is working as an electrician technician in a factory that produces beer (brewery or beer factory. I don't know which of those two words are better) named Bavaria or Pilsen. They sell one of the best beers in the country of Colombia. My friend enjoys working there and he is so happy with that kind of job.

At this moment, John Fredy is single, but he has a girlfriend and he told me, at the beginning of this year, that he was thinking of getting married at the end of December of this year. I said congratulations to him because of that decision, and I would like to be at his wedding, but I think that I am not going to have money to go to Colombia because I am so new here in this country and I don’t have a job to earn money and be able go to my country and be with my friend at his marriage.

Ok teacher, this is a short story about my best friend John Fredy. I hope you like it and correct my mistakes in writing.

Thanks for all your help with my learning of the English language.
God bless you and have a good day.

Saturday homework

Homework:

The homework is to write on the blog a summary about a person. You can write about Sunny or about a friend of yours or about a fictional person.

I know you are busy. You only have to write a short paragraph:

example: He was born in Mexico and moved to New York when he was ten years old. He has been living in Brooklyn with his sister and her husband for three years. His dream is to be a horticulturalist, and he is studying botany at Laguardia Community College. In the future, he is going to enroll in a master's course at Columbia University.

Book recommendation:

You don't have to buy a book for class. We are practicing grammar in class and on-line. If you want more practice with a book, you can try one of these. Both are good for learning and review:

1. "Understanding and Using English Grammar."

The writer is Betty Azar

and the publisher is Prentice Hall Regents

It is available at Amazon.com (online only)

http://www.amazon.com/Understanding-English-Grammar-Student-without/dp/013958661X

and

2. "Grammar In Use"

The writer is Murphy.

The publisher is Cambridge

It is also available at Amazon.com

http://www.amazon.com/English-Grammar-Use-Answers-Intermediate/dp/052143680X


If you prefer to go to a bookstore, a bookstore that sells textbooks is Barnes and Noble. I suggest you call the store before you go to be sure they have the book. You can find store locations and phone numbers here. (Don't be shy. Just ask, "Do you have Grammar in Use? The writer is Murphy. The publisher is Cambridge. Oh, really? You have it? Could you please tell me the price?")

http://store-locator.barnesandnoble.com/storelocator/stores.aspx?pagetype=storeList&city=&state=NY&zip=#content

Sandra Guerrero

Patricia was born in Ecuador. She moved to New York, 10 years ago, and now she lives alone in Queens. Patricia wants to be a Business Administrator.
She has been studing business since 1 year at te Hunter College; but she told me, she needs to improve her English also because is too hard to understand everything in the classroom.
I know Patricia will to reach her objetives because she is very smart and able.

Lupita by Yumi.

I would like to introduce to you my partner Lupita.
Lupita is her nick name.
Her real name is Nadia A Ramirez.
And she is from Armenia,Colombia.

She worked Bank secretary when she lived in Armenia.
She has worked at Import and Export company in New York.
But She wants to become a interior designer.

She interested in that N.Y has a lot of museum.
So she likes art and N.Y city very much.

She thinks grammar is the most diffcult about English for her.
And she would like to improve her English before she start to learn interior design.

She is positive and ambitious.

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Yumi, this is the correction of your writing:

I would like to introduce to you my partner Lupita.
Lupita is her nick name.
Her real name is Nadia A Ramirez,
and she is from Armenia,Colombia.

She worked as a bank secretary when she lived in Armenia.
She has worked at an import and export company in New York,
but she wants to become an interior designer.

She is interested in the fact that N.Y has a lot of museums.
She likes art and N.Y city very much.

She thinks grammar is the most diffcult about English for her,
and she would like to improve her English before she starts to learn interior design.

Nadia is positive and ambitious.

Miners

Read the statements about the rescued miners. Decide if they are true (T) or false (F).




The miners were trapped underground for a little under two months.


T / F




It took almost a day to bring all of the miners to the surface.


T / F




None of the miners had any medical problems when they came up.


T / F




The article says more people watched the rescue than the World Cup.


T / F




There were a few problems with the rescue which delayed things.


T / F




No one has spent longer so deep underground and survived.


T / F




Chile’s president said the miners fought too much while underground.


T / F




The president said the miners’ ordeal had changed Chile.


T / F

Maria, introduced by Jessica Lopez

I would like to introduce you to my partner, Maria. she is from Colombia.
She is a very friendly and polite person. Maria is living in New york around 5 years, working very hard for have a confortable life here whith her family. Her job in Colombia was an administrate and now she continue doing tha seme thing "administrating a restaurant". Now she is teiking English classes like me. We know, we have to study very hard for reach our objetives the more difficult about English for her is speak but Maria loves to live in New York.

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Jessica, this is the correction of your introduction to Maria:

I would like to introduce you to my partner, Maria. she is from Colombia.
She is a very friendly and polite person. Maria has been living in New york around 5 years, working very hard to have a comfortable life here with her family. Her job in Colombia was an administrator and now she continues doing the same thing "administering a restaurant". Now she is taking English classes like me. We know we have to study very hard to reach our objectives. The most difficult about English for her is speaking, but Maria loves to live in New York.

Sandra Guerrero by luis

I interviewed Sandra,she's from Bogota Colombia she works in a restaurant, she been working there for two years.she would like to have a better job and have a better life with her family but first she needs to improve and learn english, that's why she is attenteding this program.

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Luis, this is the correction of your entry:

I interviewed Sandra. She's from Bogota Colombia. She works in a restaurant. She has been working there for two years. She would like to have a better job and have a better life with her family but first she needs to improve and learn English. That's why she is attending this program.

Luis Guamanzara's interview to Zofia

Zofia is from Poland;she's married ,she live 9years in New York.She live's in Queens.She works as a home atendant.she has a daughter.
I met her las semester she's a nice person,she's doing her best to learn english and i think she's going to do it.

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Luis, this is the correction of your writing:

Zofia is from Poland;she's married. She has lived for nine years in New York. She lives in Queens. She works as a home attendant. She has a daughter.
I met her last semester. She's a nice person. She's doing her best to learn English and I think she's going to do it.

JHON AGUDELO

I talk with my partner about her country. Her name is Elzbieta and she is from Poland. She told me that she likes to be with senior people. She said to me that she didn't know how to dance. I think she is a nice person and I would like to go to her country to know many places there.

I had a nice day talking to my dear Polish classmate.

Thanks for this opportunity to speak with you, Polish woman.

Nadia A. Ramirez

My partner's name is:Yumi Akino

She came to New York to learn how to speak good english

and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible for her to get a better job and she can continue her career.

She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.

The most difficult for her about english is to speak out with people.

Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher,once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt, that is why she can not practice yoga anymore.

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Nadia, here is the corrected entry:

My partner's name is Yumi Akino. She came to New York to learn how to speak good English and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible to get a better job and to be able to continue her career.

She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.

The most difficult for her about English is to speak out with people.

Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher. Once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt. That is why she can not practice yoga anymore.

maria cruz

I would like to introduce to my partner she is a very nice girl,her name is Jessica.

Jessica is a girl from Ecuador who come to New York five years ago.Jessica actually is a housekeeping who lives with your family. Her goal is to become in a Physical Therapy.

She loves New York but sometimes she missed her old friends from her country, her relatives and all things that he can do there.

Jessica knows that to learn English is her first step to get a better job and then to go to school.
Jessica wants to improve the writing ,that is her more difficult about English.

riccardo mia

my new friend he name is takahiro, he is from japan. he"s working. as system program. he is single, he is living in queens, he is living alone, he be in united state. 6 months, he is planning to live here for a long time. so one day he"S is going to go back. visit the family, he like soccer his team name is. borussia dortmund ( Germany team).he like New york.

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Ricardo, this is the corrected entry:

My new friend's name is Takahiro. He is from japan. He's working. as systems programmer. He is single and living in Queens. He lives alone. He has been in the U.S. for 6 months, and he is planning to live here for a long time. One day he is going to go back and visit the family. He likes soccer. His team's name is Borussia Dortmund (a German team). He likes New york.

Magaly Rodriguez

Sandra came to New York because she wants to learned English continuous her career and has a better life and this country.
Sandra wants to be an accounting.
Before Sandra came to New York she was accounting in Colombia.
yes Sandra does.
Sandra says the most difficult thing in English for her is the pronunciation and the writing.
Sandra wants to continuous studies English and focus in her career and order for her to reaches her objectives.

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Magaly, this is the corrected entry:

Sandra came to New York because she wants to learn English to continue her career and have a better life and this country.

Sandra wants to be an accountant.

Before Sandra came to New York she was an accountant in Colombia.

Yes, Sandra does.

Sandra says the most difficult thing in English for her is the pronunciation and the writing.

Sandra wants to continuous studying English and focus on her career in order for her to reach her objectives.

SANDRA GUERRERO

Magaly came to New York to improve the English because she wants to get better job and has better life in this country.
Magaly wants to be a excellent teacher or to work in a bank.
Magaly before to come to New York she was student teaching career in Dominican Republic.
Yes, Magaly likes New York.
For Magaly the most difficult thing in English is writing and pronunciation.
For Magaly reaches her objectives, she wants to continue study English and the focus in career teacher.

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Sandra, this is the corrected entry:

Magaly came to New York to improve her English because she wants to get a better job and have a better life in this country.

Magaly wants to be an excellent teacher or to work in a bank.

Before coming to New York, she was studying for a teaching career in the Dominican Republic.

Yes, Magaly likes New York.

For Magaly the most difficult thing in English is writing and pronunciation.
For Magaly to reach her objectives, she wants to continue studying English and focus on her career as a teacher.

kimberley by marzena

Kimberley lives with American family she works two days of week she is babysister.she is interested about art and culture.she studies art in Bolivia .she very likes New York, American culture and American people. the most difficult for her is american grammar.her objectives is learn Eanglish.she comes to US two months ago.

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Marzena, this is the correction of your entry:

Kimberley lives with an American family. She works two days of week. She is a babysitter. She is interested in art and culture. She studied art in Bolivia. She likes New York, American culture and American people very much. The most difficult for her is American grammar. Her objective is to learn English. She came to the U.S. two months ago.

marzena by kimberley

Marzena is from Poland, she's been her for four years, she doesn't have family here only her cousins, she lives with a polish American family, she works five days a week, she's baby sister. she is interested in culture, she's lawyer and she wants continue her education. she likes New York, and the American people. she thinks the most difficult about the English is the grammar and the speaking. her objectives is first learn English, she said than she learn English she has good job, and she can communicate with the rest of the people, that's the most important.

Elizabeth by iwona

Elizabeth is my school partner.She is from Peru,she was growing in Lima.When she was 24 she start study pharmacy,but after 4 years she stop. And 5 years ago she comm to NY.Now she is 30 years old,she is a babysitter and she work in NJ.Elizabeth have a two younger sisters with are also in America. Elizabeth love New York a lot.
Elizabeth might wont to work and save many,to develop her carrier.She is very ambitious person,she is study long distance education by internet. In the future she wont to be port management and customs. The hardest think in English for her is gamma and writing.After ESL she wont to continue education in LaGuardia Community Collage.

Welcome back!

-Did you come to school yesterday? Why not?

-Did you enjoy the long weekend? If possible, please tell me about something fun you did.

-Who was Christopher Columbus?

-Does your country celebrate Columbus Day?

-Does your country celebrate a holiday like Columbus Day?


These are some questions about Columbus Day. Listen and answer the questions (in your notebook). If you can't understand by listening, you can go to the inbox and Message B to read.


-When did Columbus come to America?

-What is Columbus Day called in Spain? In Latin America?

-Is everyone happy about the celebrations of Columbus Day? Who is not?

-What does Columbus day represent for indigenous people all across the Americas?

-What country was he from?

-Who gave him financial help?

-Why did he want to prove?

-What else did he want from the "New World"?

-What did most people in the 15th Century believe about the Earth?

-What did he call the place where he landed?

-Where did he think he was?

-What did he call the indigenous people?

Obesity

Good morning. Today's topic is OBESITY (very very fat) and CULTURE


First, please talk with your partner.

1. Are there a lot of obese (very fat) people in the U.S.? In your country? (yes, there are. No, there aren't). Please explain.

- What makes people fat? (answer example: "no exercise" makes people fat)

2. Is there a high obesity rate in your country?

3. Why or why not?

4. Are most people in your country well-educated or not? Why?

5. Is the life-style in your country different from the life-style in the United States? How?

6. Who has a higher obesity rate, well-educated or uneducated people?

7. In the world, speakers of which language are most obese?

The Light Eater Junho Lee

Oscar is trying to fix his food plan so that he can live longer. As studies have shown they said that if you eat less than you live longer. In this story the character, Oscar talks about making himself dinner. It was 11 p.m. and he was trying to make pasta. In the story it talks about how he uses ingredients and adds them to the pasta. It mentioned that he liked the pecans the best because there were so little of them. After he finishes off with the pasta he ends with a dessert with Hersheys dark chocolate and milk. He mentions that in the end, the pasta was worth waiting for.

this is junho and my classmate

1. Are there a lot of obese (very fat) people in the U.S.? In your country? (yes, there are. No, there aren't). Please explain.
- What makes people fat? (answer example: "no exercise" makes people fat)

There are not many obese people in Korea because Korean people
don't like oily food. Korean people eat Kimch everyday, so it makes
them to stay healthy and slim.
- No exercise can make people fat, but I guess what you eat is more
important. If you want to stay away from obesity, you should control
your diet.

2. Is there a high obesity rate in your country?

No, It's less than 10%.

3. Why or why not?

Because Korean people eat Kimch and other vegetables almost
everyday and we don't eat a lot. We also like to exercise.

4. Are most people in your country well-educated or not? Why?

There are least percentage of illiterate people in Korea. I guess
it's because Korean parents think education as a very important
matter.

5. Is the life-style in your country different from the life-style in the United States? How?

Yes. I used to play a lot with my friends in Korea, but I have to
study english very hard in the U.S.

6. Who has a higher obesity rate, well-educated or uneducated people?

I guess American people have higher obesity rate. It's less than
10% in Korea, and more than 30% in the U.S. Also, Korean people are
more educated than people in the U.S because almost 99% of the Korean
can write and read their own language.

7. In the world, speakers of which language are most obese?

I am not sure, but I guess English speakers are most obese because
of the food they eat.

Arcelia'opinion

She is from panama. Her contry's people were common. NY is obeser than Panama.
NY's people eat junk food and do not exercise. The result, people becoam obese. She always eat beans there are very healty. Her exercise which is cleaning at her house.
Fainaly she said taking people education is important.

My partner said have many obesity in the US and no more in Turkey because about obesity well information...^^

My partner's name is David

1. my partner said, in USA has a lot of obese people because most people always eat junk food and no exercise. He said sometime when he take subway some obese people sat down 2 seats.
2. He said, there isn't a high obesity rate in his country.
3. He said, in his country most people are slim because they want to be good appearance same an actor or actress in the movie.
4. He said, in his country most people are well-educated.
7. USA

christo ines

hi my name is christos this is one conversation that i had before with my perthner ines... in the first she answer yes they are alot of fat people in us..she told me in us the people eat alot of fast food an and drink to much soda and people dont training for this reason people are fat... in the second she told me that in corea people arent obesity... in the third she told people arent obesity beckause people eat healty food like vegetables...iin the fourth she told me the people must educated...in the fifth she told me the life style is difrent beckause the people don wear shoes in the rooms...she told me the most obese speakers is the english ...

joony and my classmate is jazmin

* Are there a lot of obese (very fat) people in the U.S.? In your country? (yes, there are. No, there aren't). Please explain.
- yes, they are. Because i can see many obesy people in U.S.

* What makes people fat? - I think, junk food makes people fat.

* Is there a high obesity rate in your country? - NO. 10%

* Why or why not? - Because Elsaluador food is low carolies.

* Are most people in your country well-educated or not? Why?
- she does not know

* Is the life-style in your country different from the life-style in the United States? How? - Yes, it's different. it's different wether and season


* Who has a higher obesity rate, well-educated or uneducated people?
- We don't know

* In the world, speakers of which language are most obese? - We think, English

about Christo ines

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jazmin and my partner is Joony

Joony said in his country the people is not fat because the people eat very good.End his country to many people have exercise end drink a lot water. He said in U.S.A the people is more fat because the food is very bad to many fat food. Joony said in U.S.A the people don't have time for exercise only for work end the people drink a lot soda not water

About My Partners's countries.

I talked with two ladies partner about their countries life style each other. Their name's are Justina and Hande. Hande told me that there are many foods cheeper than many things for life in NY, but vagetables are expensive more than meats in NY, her country is not.She never eats pork, because her religion can not, but she can eat other meats. Justina told me about life style of Korean. Now, they want good life themslevs, so they eat many nutritional foods and they do exercise every day.

Obesity

My partner is Justina. Justina is from Korea. Justina said that there are not many obese people in her country. Because Korean people usually don`t eat fast food. vegetables and fruit are very popular food in Korea. Korean food is very healthy. Korean people are exercise everyday. American people no exercise therefore they are very fat. In here obesity is very big problem. everybody eat fast food in here. In here vegetables and fruit are more expensive than Korea.

About obesity in another countries

My partner is Hande told me In U.S.A, Vegetable is very expensive, but fast food isn't expensive.Many American people don't exercise,but they eat too much. She was born in Turkey, she proud her mother country. Vegetable is cheep in Turkey, so almost people enjoy the that. Turkey has obesity people 10 percent. Christina told me, China people always have a treditional tea. The tea names are 'green' 'boi'. Despite oiled food, they have to stay healty that point.

My partner Karina.

1.My partner said that there are not many obese people in her country because they eat healthy food and do exercise
-bad food and no exercise make people fat.
2.No.
3.Because they eat healthy food and do exercise.
4.No,because in her country,people teach them well that they have to eat good food.
5.Yes,it is difference from U.S. because the people produce the healthy food.
6.Uneducated people.
7.US.

What is obese to Lek

My name is karina and my parter said that the obese in Us is a big problem in US.
In her Country the almost food bacame of herb so is more healthy. She said also that the bad food and dont do execise make more fast people.In her contry is no a hight obesity rate in her country because they eat very well. She say that the part of her country where she lived is similar to New York so we can see the obesity too. She think that people that uneducated people have more chance to obesity. She say that the country that have more obesity in he world is Us.

Talking about obese people with Lovely girl ( Seul Ah)

Seaul Ah said" I have read in one research that shows a mount of obese people in US is nearly 60 percentages because they do not walk just use car for travelling.

and she told me about a high obesity rate in her country less than in US because Korean people eat more vegetable and rice that are very healthy food and also Korean style is different from US to do not wear shoes in their house like in US.

Next,in her country has well-educated that shows in Korean have to learn English in high school but she thinks these people are not obese due to they know which food is good quality.

lastly, her opinion, people who speak English in native language are most obese because their eating tradition!!


by Siwapon Topon

My partner beautiful swapon said about "obese and culture"

1. Are there a lot of obese (very fat) people in the U.S.? In your country? (yes, there are. No, there aren't). Please explain.

yes, they are. Because i can see many obesy people in U.S.
No,they aren't but some people become obese people because nowdays many people busy so they want to save the time,they buy the junk food.But thai food is low calories.

- What makes people fat? (answer example: "no exercise" makes people fat)

I think 'no exercise' and 'eat junk food' makes people fat.

2. Is there a high obesity rate in your country?
NO. 20% people is obesy in thai .

3. Why or why not?
Because thai food is low carolies.

4. Are most people in your country well-educated or not? Why?
I think it's depend on city. Big city is well-educated but country side people is poor so they can't educated very well.

5. Is the life-style in your country different from the life-style in the United States? How?
USA people more use the bicycle than thailand people because thai people think bicycle is more harder than car. So they want to use car.

6. Who has a higher obesity rate, well-educated or uneducated people?
I think well-educated person higer obesy rate than uneducated people because they well- educated person is busy so they want to save their time so they usually eat junk food.So they are more getting fat.

7. In the world, speakers of which language are most obese?

English.

manami

My partner is Sunisa,Thailand girl.
1 No,there aren't.Because Thai food is healthy,Thai people want to exercise.
-To mach eat food is making fat people.
2 No, there aren't.
3 They like skinny.
4 Yes, they are.Because it is very important to find a good job in Thai land.
5 Yes, they are.New York is busier than Thai.

It is almost same about obesity Thai end Japan.
Particularly young women want to be skinny.
When I lived in Japan,I thought so.
My feeling is changed while I've lived here for 4 months.
I became to not pay attention for my shape.
I don't know it is good or not for me.

1. Are there a lot of obese (very fat) people in the U.S.? In your country? (yes, there are. No, there aren't). Please explain.

yes, Luis said that in U.S, there are many obese people. But in Ecuador there are not obese people because, in Ecuador, it's very hot and they like do exercises

- What makes people fat? (answer example: "no exercise" makes people fat)

because American eats a lot of oily foods and junk foods

2. Is there a high obesity rate in your country?
No

3. Why or why not?

In Ecuador, they don't eat junk foods there are not street vendor and junk food stores.
4. Are most people in your country well-educated or not? Why?
He does not know

5. Is the life-style in your country different from the life-style in the United States? How?
Yes, it's different. it's different wether and season
6. Who has a higher obesity rate, well-educated or uneducated people?
We don't know
7. In the world, speakers of which language are most obese?
We think, English!!

He sail There were lots of people who get very fat in The US as They almost of all ate meat and don't like to eat vegetable.

In hisperspective there are 30% obesity and get splendid education

About My Partner Country

My partner said that there are have about 30% of obese in his country because in his country eat a lot of VEG. In U.S., he said that there are have a lot of obese because
he went to manhattan who sew many people of fat and he hardry sew people of U.S. eat
VEG.

people obesity

my partner, Tomoaki says in his country, Japan, not many people obese, because in his country many people eat healthy food like vegetable and fish. Not like people in US, the people in US like eat junk food so thats is a problem to make people obesity.
In japan not higher rate obesity people. He say, the obesity not depends of the higher or educational because the obesity come from the sense of people. If the people care about their life or their body, thats people will care their food, so thats people don't get the obesity. He thinks the speakers of which languages not most obese.

My partner said in the US have a lot of fat people.
The reason of get they fat because they don't have time to eat good food.
they just eat junk food for breakfast or lunch and dinner.
In her country have fat people too but less than US.
Her from China in her country have many kind of foods and people in her country don't busy like US.
People in her country have good education.
Every parent think education is very important
Life-style in her country very different from US.
different about culture and everything because she from Asia.
More fat people have well-education.
Speak of which language is not important.

xiaozhong

My partner,Yrma, said that there are not many obese people in her country because
people eat fish and vegetables and thay do exercises every day. SO there isn't a high obesity rate in her country. Thay are most people in her country uneducated because their familys have more than three children . Thay do not have a lot of money to pay tuition .

overweight

1. No, there aren't a lot of obese people in switzerland.
People don't do exercise and don't eat vegetables.
They like to eat junk food and play computer game.

2. No, there aren't. Antonio said that Switzerland is a low obesity rate.

3. Because NYC is easy to buy food outside but Switzerland is not.
If you want to eat food, you have to go big restaurant or other city.

4.Most people are well-educated in switzerland.

5. The life-style is different in switzerland.
If they finish the work, they just go home.
They sometimes do hobby. They don't run around outside at night without weekend.
They like to enjoy with their family at home.

6. maybe.... well-educated.... because they continue to study hard until asleep,
so they don't move anywhere.

7. I'm not sure. I just think that English speakers are most obese.

My partner said that there are a lot of obese people in his country, they usually eat many can become fat's food.For example Mcdonald's and Coca in his life.
In his country, every people can have well-educated, because his parens want her children have a good future.
My partner think that his coutry most different from the life-style in the United States. They have different culture, education and US have very busy life.
He think that the english is important in the world.

Well-educated is most overweight.

My partner said that there are not many obese people in his country because they always eat rice and lot of vegetable. Almost people in his country are not interesting in fast food. He said the life-style in his country different from the life-style in the United States because there are in different culture. Also he said higher obesity rate is well-educated because they are the people who sit all day, eat junk food, drink many coffee and Coke, never do the exercise.