Agnes, Akesksandra and Karina

Look at the original sentences and corrections


original: Dr. Alfredo Hinojosa came to the United States when he have 16 years old.

Change have to was.

original: His first job in the U.S. was a migrant farm worker.

Correct!

original: He is from small town name Mexicali that is a border of Mexico and California.

Correction: He is from a small town named Mexicali that is on the border of Mexico and California.

original: When he was six years old Alfredo's have his first job at his father's gas station.

Change "Alfredo's" to "Alfredo."

Change "have" to "had"

original: Now Alfredo is a neurosurgeon and cancer Resercher and Profesor at Johns Hopkins University.

"Resercher" and "Profesor" are misspelled. Also, they should not begin with capital letters.