KONRAD, "Hubert's story"
Konrad, the corrected version of your writing is below your original. In fact, the writing was 99% correct.
Hubert was born in a very poor family in Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why, he decided to get some education and study hard.
After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.
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Hubert was born in a very poor family in the Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to the USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to the emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why he decided to get some education and study hard.
After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.
Hubert was born in a very poor family in Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why, he decided to get some education and study hard.
After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.
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Hubert was born in a very poor family in the Ukraine. Nothing came easy for him and he hated his job and life. Then, one day he got an opportunity to go to the USA, but he did not have the money for an airline ticket. So he worked day and night to make his dream come true. Once, he even blacked out in his job and was transported to the emergency room. But eventually he managed to earn enough money for the flight. On a sunny day of June Hubert flew to New York. That day changed his life forever. Although the beginnings were hard and he worked as a delivery boy, he was happy. Unfortunately, one day he was hit by a bus. He landed in a hospital, but eventually received money from insurance. It was a turning point in his life because he realized how fragile life can be. That’s why he decided to get some education and study hard.
After graduating from college, Hubert works now as an account specialist in Citi bank.
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