Saturday, October 16, 2010

kimberley by marzena

Kimberley lives with American family she works two days of week she is babysister.she is interested about art and culture.she studies art in Bolivia .she very likes New York, American culture and American people. the most difficult for her is american grammar.her objectives is learn Eanglish.she comes to US two months ago.

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Marzena, this is the correction of your entry:

Kimberley lives with an American family. She works two days of week. She is a babysitter. She is interested in art and culture. She studied art in Bolivia. She likes New York, American culture and American people very much. The most difficult for her is American grammar. Her objective is to learn English. She came to the U.S. two months ago.

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