Friday, October 22, 2010

Lupita by Yumi.

I would like to introduce to you my partner Lupita.
Lupita is her nick name.
Her real name is Nadia A Ramirez.
And she is from Armenia,Colombia.

She worked Bank secretary when she lived in Armenia.
She has worked at Import and Export company in New York.
But She wants to become a interior designer.

She interested in that N.Y has a lot of museum.
So she likes art and N.Y city very much.

She thinks grammar is the most diffcult about English for her.
And she would like to improve her English before she start to learn interior design.

She is positive and ambitious.

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Yumi, this is the correction of your writing:

I would like to introduce to you my partner Lupita.
Lupita is her nick name.
Her real name is Nadia A Ramirez,
and she is from Armenia,Colombia.

She worked as a bank secretary when she lived in Armenia.
She has worked at an import and export company in New York,
but she wants to become an interior designer.

She is interested in the fact that N.Y has a lot of museums.
She likes art and N.Y city very much.

She thinks grammar is the most diffcult about English for her,
and she would like to improve her English before she starts to learn interior design.

Nadia is positive and ambitious.

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