Iwona .Homework 10.23.10
Dorota,
The original version of your story is above and the correction is under it.
This story is about my frend Dorota.
Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very yang aworked in many places not being able to warm up the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school evenings at college that she could realize her plans.After a few years it managed to get a job at a law firm.Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains, but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and beginning to understand her skills.Now Dorothy is 30 years old, runs his own lawyer kncelarie.
story of my friend, it motivates me to work and self-confidence.
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This story is about my friend Dorota.
Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very young and worked in many places, not being able to warm up to the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school in the evenings at college so that she could realize her plans. After a few years she managed to get a job at a law firm. Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains (I don't understand "well plantains), but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and she began to develop her skills. Now Dorothy is 30 years old and runs her own lawyer firm.
The story of my friend motivates me to work and have self-confidence.
The original version of your story is above and the correction is under it.
This story is about my frend Dorota.
Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very yang aworked in many places not being able to warm up the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school evenings at college that she could realize her plans.After a few years it managed to get a job at a law firm.Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains, but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and beginning to understand her skills.Now Dorothy is 30 years old, runs his own lawyer kncelarie.
story of my friend, it motivates me to work and self-confidence.
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This story is about my friend Dorota.
Dorota was born in Poland in 1980.She came to N.Y.when she was 19.Dorota was very young and worked in many places, not being able to warm up to the place anywhere.She had to start going to school, because she does not speak the language well enough to get good jobs.She worked hard and attended school in the evenings at college so that she could realize her plans. After a few years she managed to get a job at a law firm. Unfortunately, there was a job well plantains (I don't understand "well plantains), but Dorothy did not give up and worked more and harder, which paid off and she began to develop her skills. Now Dorothy is 30 years old and runs her own lawyer firm.
The story of my friend motivates me to work and have self-confidence.
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