SANDRA GUERRERO

Magaly came to New York to improve the English because she wants to get better job and has better life in this country.
Magaly wants to be a excellent teacher or to work in a bank.
Magaly before to come to New York she was student teaching career in Dominican Republic.
Yes, Magaly likes New York.
For Magaly the most difficult thing in English is writing and pronunciation.
For Magaly reaches her objectives, she wants to continue study English and the focus in career teacher.

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Sandra, this is the corrected entry:

Magaly came to New York to improve her English because she wants to get a better job and have a better life in this country.

Magaly wants to be an excellent teacher or to work in a bank.

Before coming to New York, she was studying for a teaching career in the Dominican Republic.

Yes, Magaly likes New York.

For Magaly the most difficult thing in English is writing and pronunciation.
For Magaly to reach her objectives, she wants to continue studying English and focus on her career as a teacher.