Thursday, October 28, 2010

Riccardo's writing

Riccardo, this is the corrected version:

This is the story of a young man. His name is Mark Sanchez. Mark was a quarterback from the University of Southern California (USC). He wanted to be a professional football player and came to the New York Jets last year. As a rookie he did a good job, but this year he is doing great so far. The only problem for him is this: He got into using steroids to get more muscles and be more strong, because as a quarterback you receive a lot of impact to your body. But that is the price some peoples have to pay to be rich and famous.

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