Nadia A. Ramirez
My partner's name is:Yumi Akino
She came to New York to learn how to speak good english
and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible for her to get a better job and she can continue her career.
She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.
The most difficult for her about english is to speak out with people.
Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher,once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt, that is why she can not practice yoga anymore.
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Nadia, here is the corrected entry:
My partner's name is Yumi Akino. She came to New York to learn how to speak good English and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible to get a better job and to be able to continue her career.
She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.
The most difficult for her about English is to speak out with people.
Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher. Once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt. That is why she can not practice yoga anymore.
She came to New York to learn how to speak good english
and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible for her to get a better job and she can continue her career.
She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.
The most difficult for her about english is to speak out with people.
Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher,once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt, that is why she can not practice yoga anymore.
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Nadia, here is the corrected entry:
My partner's name is Yumi Akino. She came to New York to learn how to speak good English and she is interested in learning the language as soon as possible to get a better job and to be able to continue her career.
She used to be a Yoga teacher but she injured herself and now she is thinking of becoming an exercise teacher.
The most difficult for her about English is to speak out with people.
Before Yumi came to New York she used to exercise very hard to become a teacher. Once
she reached her goals she had an accident and her shoulder got hurt. That is why she can not practice yoga anymore.
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