sonia " Things we have in common"

Not only do all of us go to work every day, but all of us also enjoyed going to the beach last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to learn English  more. In addition, we have all finished the English homework this week and would like to move to a better neighborhood

Sonia,

This is completely correct. Not only did you write a difficult, complex connected series of sentences, but you also successfully posted it on the blog.

You forgot the period (.) at the end, but that's just an oversight.