Not only all of us take the subway every day, BUT all of us also enjoyed taking with our friends last year.Moreover in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties.IN addition. we have all endured cold weather this week and would like to live in NEW YORK forever....
Let me recommend two changes. Look at the word and punctuation mark in bold type to see the corrections:
Note: BUT and IN and NEW YORK should not be capitalized.
Not only do all us take the subway every day, but all of us also enjoyed talking with our friends last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties. In addition, we have all endured cold weather this week and would like to live in New York forever.
Let me recommend two changes. Look at the word and punctuation mark in bold type to see the corrections:
Note: BUT and IN and NEW YORK should not be capitalized.
Not only do all us take the subway every day, but all of us also enjoyed talking with our friends last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties. In addition, we have all endured cold weather this week and would like to live in New York forever.
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