Saturday, January 25, 2014

cecilia THINGS WE HAVE COMMON


  NOT  only do all of us go to work every day,but all of us also enjoyed studying English last year.
Moreover ,in 2014 we are all going to pass level 7.In addition ,all of us have been worked and we would like to change lifestyle.


Cecilia,

This looks good. There is a minor mechanical problem. A comma (,) or period (.) should have no space before it and 1 space after it.

incorrect: "every day,but"

incorrect: "every day , but"

incorrect: "every day ,but"

correct: "every day, but" (no space before the comma and 1 space after it)

"All of us have been worked" is incorrect.

There are two choices, both correct.

present perfect ("have" or "has"+ verb (past participle): "All of us have worked"

present perfect continuous ("have" or "has"+ been (this is past participle of "be")+ Verb (ing form): "All of us have been working."

present perfect continuous suggests the action is continuous. With present perfect, the action may not be continuous.

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