Pawel
THING WE HAVE IN COMMON
Not only do all of us work every day, but all of us also enjoyed traveling.Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to take vacation.In addition, we have all practiced English this week and would like to win lotto.
Pawel, this is well done. The only errors are mechanical.
You should capitalize "Lotto" because it is a name (of a game).
Remember to leave one space after a period (and no space before it)
incorrect: "traveling.Moreover," and "vacation.In"
correct: "traveling. Moreover," and "vacation. In"
That's a minor error, but writing is visual communication, so the appearance is important.
Pawel, this is well done. The only errors are mechanical.
You should capitalize "Lotto" because it is a name (of a game).
Remember to leave one space after a period (and no space before it)
incorrect: "traveling.Moreover," and "vacation.In"
correct: "traveling. Moreover," and "vacation. In"
That's a minor error, but writing is visual communication, so the appearance is important.
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