Beleln Gallego
Not only do we go to work, but we also, in 2014 we will go to celebrate thanksgiven with our family and we will be going to open bank acount
Belen, this is okay but needs some changes. Look at the bold type below to see the corrections.
Not only do we go to work, but in 2014 we will also celebrate (or: we are also going to celebrate) Thanksgiving with our families, and we will open (or: we are going to open) bank accounts.
Belen, this is okay but needs some changes. Look at the bold type below to see the corrections.
Not only do we go to work, but in 2014 we will also celebrate (or: we are also going to celebrate) Thanksgiving with our families, and we will open (or: we are going to open) bank accounts.
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