Things we have in common,by Umida

Not only do all of us go to work,every day, but all of us also enjoyed dancing with our friends last year.Moreover,in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties. In addition, we have all done a homework this week and would like to learn and speak English good.


Umida,

Well done! The errors are mechanical. There is one space after a comma (,) or a period (.)  and no space before it.

Also, after a verb, you should use an adverb. "Good" is an adjective. The adverb is "well."

note: there is no comma before "every day."

note: "homework" is uncountable. You can say "the homework" or just "homework," but not "a homework." "A" means the number one. We can't count "one homework, two homeworks.." in the same way as we cannot count "milk."

correction: Not only do all of us go to work every day, but all of us also enjoyed dancing with our friends last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties. In addition, we have all done  homework this week and would like to learn and speak English well.