Saturday, January 25, 2014

Abeda

Notonly all of us work everyday, but all of us also enjoyed traveling with our family last year .More over, in 2014 we are all going to take a vacation . In addition, we have all practiced our English very well in this week and would like to win lotto.

Abeda,

This is very good. There are just a few errors.

Look, please, at the bold type below to see the corrections.

Not only do all of us work everyday, but all of us also enjoyed traveling with our family last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to take a vacation. In addition, we have all practiced our English very well this week and would like to win Lotto.


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