Rouf

Not only do all of us eat healthy food every day, but all of us eat also unhealthy food and enjoyed it.
Moreover, in 2014 we are trying to eat healthy food every day. In addition, we try to eat home made healthy food at home.  New York city has all kinds of food markets so you can buy any food here. This is the one of the reason people like to live in new York city forever.


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rouf


Rouf,

This is good. Let me suggest some changes.

The second clause ("but all of us eat also eat unhealthy food and enjoyed it") begins with the present tense ("eat") and changes to the past tense ("enjoyed"). That's confusing. The reader isn't sure which time you are talking about. I suggest using the present perfect (have+ verb (past participle) for the second verb ("enjoyed"). That way you are including both the present and the past.

Note: in the second clause, "also" should be before the verb

correct: "Not only do all of us eat healthy food every day, but all of us also eat unhealthy food and have enjoyed it."


There should be a comma (,) before the conjunction "so."

Note: The first letters of all three words in New York City are capitalized.

correct: New York City has all kinds of food markets, so you can buy any food here.


Note: In "one of + noun."the noun must be plural.

correct: "one of the reasons"