Sandra

No only do all of us to work every day, but all of us enjoyed visit different places in New York. Moreover in 2014 we are all going to speak English very well. In addition we have been with too much cold this week and would like to live in New York forever



Sandra, this is mostly correct.

remember, after the verb "enjoy" (or "enjoyed," or any other form) we use the gerund (ing form)

correct: enjoyed visiting

There must be a comma after "Moreover" and "In addition."

correct: "Moreover, in 2014" and "In addition, we have..

"we have been with too much cold this week" is wrong. "We have been too cold this week" is right.