Not only all of us like to work every day, but all of us enjoyed to traveling with our family last year.
Moreover in 2,014 we going to take a vacation In addition, we have all practice our English very well in this week.and would like to win lotto.


You forgot to write your name, but your writing is good.

rule: Don't use "to" before a gerund (verb+ing)

correct: "enjoyed traveling."

The future verb construction is: be (is, am, are, was, were, be, been) + going to+ verb

correct: "In 2014, we are going to take a vacation."

You should put a comma (,) after "Moreover" and end sentences with a period (.)

You should not have a period after "week" because it is not the end of a sentence.

"Lotto" is the name of a game and should be capitalized.

You don't need a comma in a year.

incorrect: 2,014

correct: 2014

"have all practice" is incorrect. It should be present perfect (have or has+ verb past participle)

correct: "have all practiced."

correction of the the last two sentences: "Moreover,  in 2014 we going to take a vacation. In addition, we have all practiced our English very well  this week and would like to win Lotto.