jose
Not only do all of us watch news before going out ,but all of us also enjoyed shopping for Christmas.Moreover in 2014 we are all going to visit different places in summer. In addition we have all shoveled the snow and would like to win a lotto.
Jose, this is expertly done.
There are only some minor mechanical problems. You need a comma (,) after "Moreover" and "In addition." Also, you need a space after each period (.)
incorrect: "Christmas.Moreover in 2014"
correct: "Christmas. Moreover, in 2014"
Note: "Lotto" is the name of the game and should be capitalized. The game is a "lottery."
correct: would like to win Lotto.
correct: would like to win a lottery.
Jose, this is expertly done.
There are only some minor mechanical problems. You need a comma (,) after "Moreover" and "In addition." Also, you need a space after each period (.)
incorrect: "Christmas.Moreover in 2014"
correct: "Christmas. Moreover, in 2014"
Note: "Lotto" is the name of the game and should be capitalized. The game is a "lottery."
correct: would like to win Lotto.
correct: would like to win a lottery.
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