juana

THING WE HAVE IN COMMON
Not only do all of us go to work every day, but all of us also enjoyed it dancing with our friends last year. Moreover, in 2014 we are all going to go to a lot of parties, In addition, we have all done a homework this week and would like to learn and speak English well.


Juana,

Impressively written.

Here are some minor errors.

"It" is not necessary after "enjoyed it."

correct: "All of us enjoyed dancing."

You should end sentences with periods (.) not commas (,)

incorrect: ".... all going to a lot of parties, In addition, we have..."

correct:  "... all going to a lot of parties. In addition, we have.."

Also, homework is uncountable, so you can't use the indefinite article (a), which means the number one.

incorrect: "a homework"

correct: "the homework" (specific)

correct: "homework" (general)

The rest is 100% correct.