Jeremy's story

          My mother and .I were in the story .They story happend in Brooklyn.MY mother an I hafa problem with house.It happened when we wentour house in Brooklyn.I fell bad.



Jeremy,

Thanks for sending your story to the blog. Problems with houses are difficult. New York houses are sometimes full of problems.

This is the correction of your writing:

My mother and I were in the story .The story happened in Brooklyn. My mother and I had a problem with a house. It happened when we went to our house in Brooklyn. I felt bad.