Thursday, October 03, 2013

Ivonne Alvarado story.

          My husband and I were the story. The story happened in New York. My husband and I had a problem with the car. It happened when we come to America. we felt great.

Ivonne,

It's great that you put your story here. Your story is almost completely correct. There are two small errors.

1. "It happened when we CAME to America" is correct.

2. "My husband and I were IN the story" is correct.

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