Maria's story

My father and I were in the story .The story happened in New York.My father an I had a problem with subway.It happened when we went our house.I felt sad.


Maria,

You were able to write on the blog! That's great! It's complicated.

Your story about New York is fine. There are three small errors.

"My father AN I" should be "My father AND I."

"with subway" should be "with THE subway."

"we went our house" should be "we went TO our house."



There is also a small punctuation error.


You should put an extra space after periods (.)

This is a  period:  .

This punctuation is incorrect: "The story happened in New York.My father and I had a problem" because there is no space after the period.

This punctuation is correct: "The story happened in New York. My father and I had a problem" because there is a space after the period.


That punctuation error is not very important but you should know about it.