Rijkaard's story

      My dad and I were in this story. This story happened in Miami , Florida .We had a problem with my visa . This happened in the miami airport . When this happend I felt nervous and worried . Because we'll lost the flight.



Rijkaard,

Your story is a good one. It is mostly correct and has good errors that you can learn from.

1. "miami" is incorrect. "Miami" is incorrect. Names (of places, people, books, movies and more) begin with a capital letter (that is, a big letter).

2. "We'll lost" is incorrect. Your story is in the past tense. The past tense of "We'll" is "We'd" ("we will" changes to "we would")

Rule: the "base form" of a verb follows a "modal" (will, can, should, would and more are "modals"),

so the correct form is "we would lose" (not "lost)" or

we will lose

we can lose

we should lose

("lose" is the base form of the verb)