Susana (:

My aunt and I were in the story the story happened in México. My aunt and I  had a problem with a salesman it happened when we came to New York. Finally fix the problem  and everybody is happy and we were go to the home.


Susana,

Thanks for sending your story to this blog. The grammar and spelling are correct. The problem is PUNCTUATION. You should remember to end sentences with PERIODS and begin sentences with "CAPITAL LETTERS" 

Please look at the correct punctuation here:

My aunt and I were in the story.  The story happened in México. My aunt and I  had a problem with a salesman.  It happened when we came to New York. Finally, WE fixED the problem  and everybody WAS happy, and we WENT HOME.