PEDRO T.

My brother  and I were in the story.
The story happened in New York.
My brother and I had a problem with the trains .
It happened when we were heading towards apartment in America.
My brother  and I felt sad.

Pedro,

It's good that you were able to send your story here. The story is almost completely correct. There is one minor problem.

Correct: It happened when we were heading toward OUR apartment in America.

The rest is perfect.