Sebastian Story

      My cousin and I were in the story. The story happened in New York. My cousin and I had a problem with fire. It happened when we came our house in to America. My cousin and I felt sad.


Sebastian,

Your story is clear, and we are glad to read it here.  Thank you for sending it.

All the sentences are correct except for the fourth, which has two errors.

The correct sentence is: "It happened when we came TO our house IN America.