Chang
Hello Everyone !
I would like introduce my partner Isaura . she is a beautiful girl and 27-year-old ，she is come from Dominic Republic.she has been here about 6 months ，when i ask her ,"Do you like NYC?" she said ,"just so so ,because sometimes i was feeling homesick."
When she was teenage she like read books ,she read the most books at that time ,now she like reading online such as news, fation and so on .
At present,she is studaying English ,she is interesting in hotel mangement ,she wants to majoy in hotel mangement after passed test from ESL program .in the future ,she wants to be working in the hotel .
In the end, i wish my partner's dream can be ture and thank you for reading. :)
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Chang, Thanks for writing this introduction to your classmate, Isaura. I have made some corrections. Please look at the corrected version and compare it with the original one:
Hello Everyone !
I would like to introduce my partner, Isaura . She is a beautiful girl and 27 years old. She comes from the Dominican Republic. She has been here about 6 months. When I asked her ,"Do you like N.Y.C.?" she said ,"Just so so, because sometimes i have been feeling homesick."
When she was teenage she liked to read books. She read the most books at that time. Now she likes reading online, such as news, fashion and so on.
At present,she is studying English. She is interested in hotel management. She wants to major in hotel management after passing the test from this ESL program. In the future ,she wants to be working in a hotel.
In the end, i wish my partner's dream can come true, and thank you for reading. :)
Thank you for correct.I should make sure capital words.Add a period at the end of each sentence and pay attention to English grammar.
does she work now?
Dear Chang,
Thank you for writing about Isaura.
What kind of movie does she like to watch?
Ismihan.
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