Luisa Jaimes
Ayda, lives in Bayside, New York, she is married and she has a girl. The girl is so sweet, and she is 13 years old, Ayda works a four days a week, her job is accounting for the Jews Company,She study English in La Guardia Community College in level four, She is a good student, every saturday to share the lunch and talk about differents things, read the news paper, and magazzines. She has been working there for five years. Next year she and her family are going to Colombia and visit their family and together they are going to Santa Marta, Barranquilla, Cartagena y la Guajira and they are going to Dominican Republic too. Last year Ayda and her family went to Colombia and Las Vegas. Before she moved to New York Ayda had lived in Colombia.
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Luisa, thanks for writing this introduction to Ayda. It is interesting, and there were not many errors.
I have written a corrected version. Please compare it to the original:
Ayda, lives in Bayside, New York. She is married, and she has a girl. The girl is so sweet, and she is 13 years old. Ayda works four days a week. Her job is accounting for a Jewish company. She studies English in LaGuardia Community College in level four. She is a good student. Every Saturday she shares lunch and talks about different things, reads the news paper and magazines. She has been working there for five years. Next year she and her family are going to Colombia and visit their family and together they are going to Santa Marta, Barranquilla, Cartagena y la Guajira, and they are going to Dominican Republic too. Last year Ayda and her family went to Colombia and Las Vegas. Before she moved to New York, Ayda had lived in Colombia.
Dear Luisa,
Thank you for writing about Ayda.
Does she like her job?
Ismihan.
Dear Ismihan, thanks for writing.
About your question, I can say that Ayda loves her work.
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