Amparo Perez
Olga works five days a week her hob is a sinagoga ,she has been working there five years Olga nex year is going to stay in spain if she can , Olga and her husban went to Paris . before she moved to new york olga had lived in Colombia.Olga has two children .they live in New York too Olga is going to take driving class , her birthday is on november twenty first Olga when finish english class she is going to look a better job because she was dental asistent but she has to speak english perfect. Olga likes to cook her favorite food is pasta the name her best friend is Dora
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Amparo, thank you for writing about your classmate and partner today, Olga.
This is the corrected version of your writing. Please look at it and compare it to the original:
Olga works five days a week. Her job is in a synagogue. She has been working there five years. Next year Olga is going to stay in Spain if she can. Olga and her husband went to Paris. before she moved to New York, Olga had lived in Colombia.
Olga has two children. They live in New York too. Olga is going to take a driving class. Her birthday is November twenty-first. When Olga finishes English class, she is going to look for a better job because she was a dental assistant
(Amparo, I don't know why the computer made this space here)
but she has to speak English perfectly. Olga likes to cook her favorite food, which is pasta. The name of her best friend is Dora.
Amparo thank you for sharing with us about Olga's life.
Is very interesting that Olga and I work for Jewish people.
How is Olga's experience working in a Synagogue.
Sincerely
Ayda Pinzon
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