Diego
Jose Asitimbay works six days a week, he has been 3 jobs in this country. He works like bass-boy, he 's happy and comfortable with his job.He came to this country 3 years ago. He live with his brother and sister. He has been living in same place from which he came to this country. he's single but he's thinking get married soon. His family is living in Ecuador, parents. When he finish to study English. he's going to study pharmacy probably the next year.He's always lived happy in this country.
posted by the blog at 6:26 PM
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Diego,
It's good to work with you again! This is the correction of the introduction of Jose you wrote. Please see how it is different from the original version:
Jose Asitimbay works six days a week. He has been doing 3 jobs in this country. He works as a bus-boy. He's happy and comfortable with his job. He came to this country 3 years ago. He lives with his brother and sister. He has been living in the same place to which he came to this country (Diego, I changed this sentence because the meaning is different than I thought on Saturday). He's single but he's thinking of getting married soon. His family, including his parents, are living in Ecuador. When he finishes studying English. he's going to study pharmacy, probably next year.He's always lived happily in this country.
Dear Diego,
Thank you for writing about Jose.
What does he do in his free time?
Ismihan.
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