Ayda Pinzon
Luisa Jaimes came to New York two years ago, She works five days a week, her job is a babysitter in the mornings and the afternoons She teach Spanish , She has been working there for two years.
Next year Luisa is going to go to Dominican Republic with her friends. She wanted to practice different sports.
Last year Luisa and her family went to Atlanty City, Washington and Las Vegas.
Before She moved to New York She had lived in Connecticut.
Luisa want to improved her English She want to be a Therapist for kids, she love work with kids, She is very smart,friendly and lovely. We were studying the third level together and share different activity in the classroom.
Next year Luisa is going to go to Dominican Republic with her friends. She wanted to practice different sports.
Last year Luisa and her family went to Atlanty City, Washington and Las Vegas.
Before She moved to New York She had lived in Connecticut.
Luisa want to improved her English She want to be a Therapist for kids, she love work with kids, She is very smart,friendly and lovely. We were studying the third level together and share different activity in the classroom.
posted by the blog at 6:22 PM
2 Comments:
Ayda, Thanks for writing your introduction to Luisa. My impression is that you are both excellent students.
This is the correction of your writing. Please take a look:
Luisa Jaimes came to New York two years ago. She works five days a week. Her job is babysitting in the mornings, and in the afternoons She teaches Spanish , She has been working there for two years.
Next year Luisa is going to go to the Dominican Republic with her friends. She wants to practice different sports.
Last year Luisa and her family went to Atlantic City, Washington and Las Vegas.
Before She moved to New York, she had lived in Connecticut.
Luisa wants to improve her English. She wants to be a therapist for kids. She loves working with kids. She is very smart,friendly and lovely. We were studying the third level together and have shared different activities in the classroom.
Dear Ayda,
Thank you for writing about Luisa.
What is her favorite food?
Ismihan.
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