Andrea works five days a week.Her job is babysitting. She has light brown hair and green eyes . In she free time, she likes do exercises.She wants to learn English so she can go to college. Last year she went to Florida. Next year she is going to Paraguay. Before she moved to New York she had lived in New Jersey.
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Thanks for writing this introduction to Andrea. This is the correction. Please look at it and compare the two versions. There were very few errors:
Andrea works five days a week. Her job is babysitting. She has light brown hair and green eyes. In her free time, she likes to do exercises.She wants to learn English so she can go to college. Last year she went to Florida. Next year she is going to Paraguay. Before she moved to New York, she had lived in New Jersey.
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