jose cabrera
HYEJUNG:
After finished her studies she wants to be a really good nurse
and to have a good opportunity to work an a hospital and stay in NY to
get a better life and just visiting to her family often,she is single
and cute...
when she is off she likes to go
with her friends to get fun,that's means to watch movies and dinner with
them,she loves comedies movies,cause the horror movies get scared and
at the night she has nightmares ....lol.she wants to have a boy friend
on the future and obviously she wants to get married as soon as she
finished her career...and have a really good family.
My expectation,she will be a really
good wife and mother ...
I know she will be make her
goals...cause she is so smart...
posted by the blog at 6:29 PM
1 Comments:
Jose,
You also wrote a lot about your classmate, Hye Jung. That collaboration is an excellent way to improve your English.
This is the corrected version of your writing. Please have a look:
HYEJUNG: She doesn't have a job for the moment. She lives in Flushing,Queens. She has been studying for six months since she got here.Before she moved to N.Y., she had lived in Korea. She has one brother and 2 older sisters. Her family is in her country. She is the only one who lives in N.Y. and she really enjoys it.
After finishing her studies, she wants to be a really good nurse and to have a good opportunity to work in a hospital and stay in N.Y. to get a better life and just visit her family often. She is single and cute... When she is off, she likes to go with her friends to have fun, which means watching movies and having dinner with them. She loves comedy movies, because horror movies scare her and at night she has nightmares ....lol.She wants to have a boyfriend in the future, and obviously she wants to get married as soon as she finishes her career...and have a really good family. My expectation is that she will be a really good wife and mother ... I know she will reach her goals...cause she is so smart...
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