Jose Zavala
Milagros works 5 days a week. She works a nursing home , she has been working for 7 years. Next year Milagros planning to get a new job if she can, last year she and her family went to Dominican Republic.Before she moved to NY she she had lived in Santigo D.R.
Milagros wants to improve her english to became a nurse in NY City , Milagros has all her family in NY and she likes to sleep in her free time.
She"s taking english classes at LaGuardia CC Collage ,she is a good student and she always on time, she has one baby girl of two years old.
Well now you know little be about my classmate Milagros.
Milagros wants to improve her english to became a nurse in NY City , Milagros has all her family in NY and she likes to sleep in her free time.
She"s taking english classes at LaGuardia CC Collage ,she is a good student and she always on time, she has one baby girl of two years old.
Well now you know little be about my classmate Milagros.
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Milagros works 5 days a week. She works a nursing home , she has been working for 7 years. Next year Milagros planning to get a new job if she can, last year she and her family went to Dominican Republic.Before she moved to NY she she had lived in Santigo D.R.
Jose, thanks for writing this introduction to Milagros- and welcome to class.
This is the corrected version of your introduction. You should take a look and see how it is different.
Milagros wants to improve her English to become a nurse in New York City (or N.Y.C., but not N.Y. City). Milagros has all her family in N.Y., and she likes to sleep in her free time.
She's taking English classes at LaGuardia Community College. She is a good student, and she is always on time. She has one baby girl of two years old.
Well, now you know little be about my classmate, Milagros.
Dear Jose,
Thank you for writing about Milagros.
What kind of a job is she looking for?
Ismihan.
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