Gabriela works five days a week. Her job is Housekeeper. She has been working there 1 years. Next year Gabriela and her family are going to Virginia Beach, Last years she and her family went to Florida, Before she moved to NY Gabriela had lived in Poland . She has blond hair and Green eyes. She wants to learn English quickly so she decided to go to school. In her free time, she likes to watch TV and read books.
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Thanks for writing about Gabriela, your classmate and partner. This is the corrected version. Please take a look at it and compare it with the original:
Gabriela works five days a week. Her job is housekeeper. She has been working there for 1 year. Next year Gabriela and her family are going to Virginia Beach. Last year she and her family went to Florida. Before she moved to N.Y., Gabriela had lived in Poland.
She has blond hair and green eyes. She wants to learn English quickly, so she decided to go to school. In her free time, she likes to watch TV and read books.
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