milagros
Jose work five days of week.his job is it jews restaurant .he has been working there ten years.next year Jose going to fly to his countrie if he can.last year hi went to atlantic city .before he moved to queens he had lived in great neck long island.Jose wants to get his a ged and to go to collage.jose is it taking english classes with me in the same room, and hi seen to be a nice person to me.
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Milagros, thanks for your introduction to Jose. I have read it and made corrections. This is the corrected version. Please take a look:
Jose works five days a week. His job is in a Jewish restaurant. He has been working there for ten years. Next year Jose is going to fly to his country if he can. Last year he went to Atlantic City. Before he moved to Queens, he had lived in Great Neck, Long Island.
Jose wants to get his GED and to go to college. Jose is taking English classes with me in the same room, and he seen to be a nice person to me.
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