purnima
sirly works five days a week. Her job is in the assistant administration in receving company.she has been working seven years . she is marriad. she had one son. Her son reading hige school. she know dance very well. She watch the move with her husdand and her son. she always watch the english move. Her works time ten to six ,then shecame back home.Sirly is a happy persion .she like to cooked every day. Some times she goes to resturent. .
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Purnima, thank you for writing this introduction to your classmate, Sirly. This is the correction. Please read it and see the differences from the original.
correction:
Sirly works five days a week. Her job is as an administrative assistant in a receiving company. She has been working for seven years. she is married. she has one son. Her son is studying in (or: already in?)high school. She knows how to dance very well. She watches movies with her husband and her son. She always watches movies in English.
Her works time is from ten to six. Then she comes back home. Sirly is a happy person. Shes like to cook every day. Some times she goes restaurants.
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