My friend Marlene

homework 10-30-2010

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My friend Marlene born en Peru, she live there for 30 years but them she fall in love and married for these reasons came to USA but when she thought finally will be happy she discovery her husband had a drug additions, her life change 360 degree she try to separate but he threatened all the time. But 3 years later finally she divorce and can star a new life.

Now she working at a factory, she living alone, she bought a car and can be herself and do everything she want.

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My friend Marlene was born in Peru. She lived there for 30 years but then she fell in love and married. For these reasons, she came to the USA, but when she thought finally she would be happy she discovered her husband had a drug addiction, and her life changed 360 degrees. She tried to separate from him but he threatened her all the time. But 3 years later she finally divorcde and can start a new life.

Now she is working at a factory. She lives alone and bought a car and can be herself and do everything she wants.