Elzbieta's story

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My good friend name is Barbara. She was born in Poland in the year 1960. She is
a teacher in Junior High School. After high school, she studied hotel management
in the city of Gdansk. When she was forty-five years old, she moved to the city
of New York. Barbara dream is to be a nurse. She has been studying at LaGuardia
College for a year now. Barbara have one daughter in Poland. Her name is Joanna.
Joanna goes to New York every year to visit her mother. She loves to eat
Japanese food. Joanna would like to live with her mother in New York for a long
time. Barbara is going to buy a house in Queens. Barbara expect to bring her
daughter to New York after she buys the house.

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My good friend name is Barbara. She was born in Poland in the year 1960. She is
a teacher in Junior High School. After high school, she studied hotel management
in the city of Gdansk. When she was forty-five years old, she moved to the city
of New York. Barbara's dream is to be a nurse. She has been studying at LaGuardia
Community College for a year now. Barbara has one daughter in Poland. Her name is Joanna.

Joanna goes to New York every year to visit her mother. She loves to eat
Japanese food. Joanna would like to live with her mother in New York for a long
time. Barbara is going to buy a house in Queens. Barbara expects to bring her
daughter to New York after she buys the house.