Marzena - Homework October 30
Marzena,
The first story is your original writing. The second one is a correction.
This story is about my friend Edyta.Edyta was born in Poland and moved to U.S - New York when she was twenty years old.She has been living in Manhattan with her sister Joanna and her boyfriend.Edyta's dream is to be a doctor.She study medicine to Grenada - Caraibbean.Now Edyta is a doctor , work a hospital and a doctor oficce.She is veary happy.The story of my friend motivates me to work.
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This story is about my friend Edyta.Edyta was born in Poland and moved to the U.S - New York- when she was twenty years old.She has been living in Manhattan with her sister Joanna and her boyfriend. Edyta's dream is to be a doctor.She studied medicine in Grenada, in the Caribbean.Now Edyta is a doctor , works in a hospital and has a doctor's office. She is very happy. The story of my friend motivates me to work.
The first story is your original writing. The second one is a correction.
This story is about my friend Edyta.Edyta was born in Poland and moved to U.S - New York when she was twenty years old.She has been living in Manhattan with her sister Joanna and her boyfriend.Edyta's dream is to be a doctor.She study medicine to Grenada - Caraibbean.Now Edyta is a doctor , work a hospital and a doctor oficce.She is veary happy.The story of my friend motivates me to work.
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This story is about my friend Edyta.Edyta was born in Poland and moved to the U.S - New York- when she was twenty years old.She has been living in Manhattan with her sister Joanna and her boyfriend. Edyta's dream is to be a doctor.She studied medicine in Grenada, in the Caribbean.Now Edyta is a doctor , works in a hospital and has a doctor's office. She is very happy. The story of my friend motivates me to work.
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