Amadeusz
Not only do all of us watch news before going out but all of us also enjoyed shopping for Christmas presents. Moreover in 2014 we are all going to different places in summer.In addition we have all shoveled the snow and would like to win a lotto.
Amadeusz, this is fine. Grammar is perfect. There are just 3 punctuation errors.
A. You need a comma (,) before "but"
B. You need a comma (,) after "Moreover" and "In addition"
C, You should put a space after a period (.)
incorrect: "summer.In "
correct: "summer. In "
Those are small errors, but if, for example, someone is applying for a job they can make a difference.
Amadeusz, this is fine. Grammar is perfect. There are just 3 punctuation errors.
A. You need a comma (,) before "but"
B. You need a comma (,) after "Moreover" and "In addition"
C, You should put a space after a period (.)
incorrect: "summer.In "
correct: "summer. In "
Those are small errors, but if, for example, someone is applying for a job they can make a difference.
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