Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Maria del Carmen

My partner, Cecilia, a 32 year old married woman who lives with her family works as Teacher Assistant and speaks Spanish, the language of her country, Dominican Republic, which us on the continent of America

Maria del Carmen, this is good. I can suggest a few corrections:

2. Don't use capital letters for the name of a job. "teacher's assistant" is correct. 

3. You missed the spelling of "is" and instead put the plural personal object pronoun "us."

4. Usually, names of countries that are 2 words or more begin with "the" (for example, "the United States"), so the correct way is "the Dominican Republic."

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