Rouf

             
             

                 My partner, Myriam, a 47 year old Marrite woman who lives with her husband and son works as a assistant teacher  and speak Spanish and Chinese ,the language of the country, pure, which is on of the continent of America, and of his hometown, Lima, which has a population of two million, She has been in new york for 18 years and feels happy here.


Rouf, this is well done. Let me suggest a few things.

1. When writing by computer, it isn't necessary to indent the first line of a paragraph. Usually, we show paragraphs are separate by leaving an extra space between them (as I have done here).

2. Remember that the article before a vowel (a, e, i, o, u) is "an" not "a."

3. Check spelling of the South American country Myriam is from.

4. The first letters of place names should be capitalized. "New York."  

5. When you finish writing, you should read again to look for mistakes, like using the masculine pronoun (his) instead of the feminine pronoun (her).