americo

Not only do all of us go to work,every day,but all of us also enjoyed dancing with our friends



Americo,

This sentence is correct in all aspects except punctuation. It should have one comma (,) only, after "day" (not before "every") and there should be a period (.) at the end of the sentence.

Also, there should be a space after the comma.

incorrect: every day,but all

correct: every day, but all