The group by Juana Garcia
There are 5 people in our group. Two are men and three are women. The maximum age is 52,the minimum age is 28 and the average age is 28. Students in our group have the following occupations:sculptor(person),construction worker,attended sale store. We are all students now.
We came from a total 5 countries and represent 2 continents Asian and American,3 languages are spoken by our group, Spanish,Chinese and Thai.
The largest hometown represented in our group is Beijing,China,with a population of is million. The smallest hometown is Ecuador,Quito with a population of 1million.
Our marital status is varied. Four person is married one is single.
Four of us live with family,one lives has a room mate.
Tree person in my group who has been,Angel and Vanessa whos came here 6 years ago. By contrast Sutchivadee has been here just 2 years. She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group,and we welcome her the average length of time in New York is about six years.
Everybody like study inglish.
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Juana,
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"The Group" by Juana Garcia
There are 5 people in our group. Two are men and three are women. The maximum age is 52,the minimum age is 28 and the average age is 28. Students in our group have the following occupations: sculptor(person), construction worker and sales attendant in a store. We are all students now.
We came from a total 5 countries and represent 2 continents: Asia and America. 3 languages are spoken by our group: Spanish,Chinese and Thai.
The largest hometown represented in our group is Beijing,China,with a population of !2(?) million. The smallest hometown is Ecuador,Quito with a population of 1million.
Our marital status is varied. Four people are married one is single.Four of us live with family, and one has a room mate.
The people in my group who have been here the longest are Angel and Vanessa, who came here 6 years ago. By contrast, Sutchivadee has been here just 2 years. She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group,and we welcome her. The average length of time in New York is about six years.
Everybody likes to study English.
There are 5 people in our group. Two are men and three are women. The maximum age is 52,the minimum age is 28 and the average age is 28. Students in our group have the following occupations:sculptor(person),construction worker,attended sale store. We are all students now.
We came from a total 5 countries and represent 2 continents Asian and American,3 languages are spoken by our group, Spanish,Chinese and Thai.
The largest hometown represented in our group is Beijing,China,with a population of is million. The smallest hometown is Ecuador,Quito with a population of 1million.
Our marital status is varied. Four person is married one is single.
Four of us live with family,one lives has a room mate.
Tree person in my group who has been,Angel and Vanessa whos came here 6 years ago. By contrast Sutchivadee has been here just 2 years. She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group,and we welcome her the average length of time in New York is about six years.
Everybody like study inglish.
---
Juana,
It's good to have your writing here. Thanks for sending it. I'm writing it again below, with corrections. Look for the differences.
You should notice punctuation: commas and periods.
"The Group" by Juana Garcia
There are 5 people in our group. Two are men and three are women. The maximum age is 52,the minimum age is 28 and the average age is 28. Students in our group have the following occupations: sculptor(person), construction worker and sales attendant in a store. We are all students now.
We came from a total 5 countries and represent 2 continents: Asia and America. 3 languages are spoken by our group: Spanish,Chinese and Thai.
The largest hometown represented in our group is Beijing,China,with a population of !2(?) million. The smallest hometown is Ecuador,Quito with a population of 1million.
Our marital status is varied. Four people are married one is single.Four of us live with family, and one has a room mate.
The people in my group who have been here the longest are Angel and Vanessa, who came here 6 years ago. By contrast, Sutchivadee has been here just 2 years. She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group,and we welcome her. The average length of time in New York is about six years.
Everybody likes to study English.
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