Padam raj badu.              
                             There are five people in our group.Three are women and two are man.The maximum
                             age is forty-nine ,the minimum age is sixteen and the average age is thirty-five.Stud
                             ent in our group have the following occupation,waiter,baby sister,accountant and dry
                             clener.We are all student now.
                                                                             We came from total of four countries and represent tw
                              o contients,Asia,and america.Three langueges are spoken by our group spanish,thai
                              and nepali.
                                                The largest hometown represented in our group is Maxico with populat
                              tion of ninety millions.The smallest hometown is Thailand with the population of
                              sixty millions.
                                                   Our marital status is varied.Three are singles,two are married.
                               Three of us live with family,one of roommate and one is living single.The person
                                is my group who has been in NewYork the longest is santiago.Who came here six
                                 teen years ago.By contrast emon has been just one month.She has been in NewY
                                ork the shortest of anyone in our group,and we welcome her.The average leant of
                                the time in NewYork is about seven years.
                                                                                                 We are happy and excited in this group

                                 to keep leaning from each others.      


Padam,

Thank you for putting your writing on the blog. I hope it wasn't difficult to use the password and user name. Anyway, you succeeded.

I've copied your article with corrections in capital (BIG) letters so they are easy to see.  Please read and see the changes. Notice, for example, that the first letter of place and people names are capitalized. Also, there is never an "s" at the end of an adjective.

    

   
"Our Group" by Padam Raj Badu


There are five people in our group.Three are women and two are MEN.The maximum age is forty-nine, the minimum age is sixteen and the average age is thirty-five. StudentS in our group have the following occupationS: waiter,babySITTER, accountant and dry cleaner. We are all studentS now.

We came from total of four countries and represent two contiNents, Asiaand America.Three languAges are spoken by our group: Spanish, Thai and Nepali.

The largest hometown represented in our group is MExico, with A POPULATION of ninety MILLION.The smallest hometown is Thailand, with A population of sixty MILLION.

Our marital status is varied.Three are SINGLE, AND two are married. Three of us live with family, one WITH A roommate and one is living single.

The person is my group who has been in NewYork the longest is Santiago, who came here sixteen years ago.By contrastT,  Emon has been just one month. She has been in NewYork the shortest of anyone in our group, and we welcome her.The average LENGTH of time in NewYork is about seven years.

 We are happy and excited in this group to keep LEARNing from each others.