Maria Penafiel  There are five people in our group all of us females . The maximum age is fouty- nine, the minimum age is twenty- three- and the average age is thirty- five . Students in our group  have the following occupations ; two babysitters, bastender,  housekeeper, housewife.   We are all students now. We come from a total of four contries and represent three continents; Sourth America , Asia, and Europe. Three lenguages  are spoken  by our group; Spanish , Azerbaijani , and Russian. The largest hometown represented in our group is Medellin, Colombia ,with a population of 1 millon, The smallest hometown is Azogues , with a population 5 tousand. Our marital  status is varied . Two people are married one person is single ,one is divorsed, one is separated. Three of us live with family members and anothers  live with roommate . The person in my group who has been in New York  the longest is Martha , who come here 20 years ago. By contrast Ulkar has been here one and half years . She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group .  The average  length  of time in New York  is about eight and  half years.         It's olways nice to meet new good people  


Maria,

Nice writing!

I've copied your article and made corrections with BIG letters so they are visible.

Some of the corrections are just one letter, for a spelling error.

Spelling in English is difficult. I advise you to use the "spell check" (abc above)

It's a good idea to make separate paragraphs. That's easier to read than one long paragraph.


"The Group" by Maria Penafiel

 There are five people in our group. All of us ARE females. The maximum age is FORTY- nine, the minimum age is twenty- three- and the average age is thirty- five . Students in our group  have the following occupations;  two babysitters, bastender,  housekeeper AND housewife.   We are all students now.

We come from a total of four coUntries and represent three continents; Sourth America , Asia, and Europe. Three lAnguages  are spoken  by our group: Spanish , Azerbaijani and Russian.

The largest hometown represented in our group is Medellin, Colombia, with a population of 1 million. The smallest hometown is Azogues, with a population OF 5 tHousand.

Our marital  status is varied . Two people are married. One person is single. One is divorCed. One is separated.

Three of us live with family members and THE others  live with roommateS.

The person in my group who has been in New York  the longest is Martha , who cAme here 20 years ago. By contrast, Ulkar has been here one and A half years . She has been in New York the shortest of anyone in our group .  The average  length  of time in New York  is about eight and A half years.

It's always nice to meet new, good people.