Soralla's Group

There are 5 people in our group. Tree are men and two women .The maximum  age is  49 years. The minimum age is 16 years. and the average age is 35. Students in our group have the following occupations. Students, babysitter, waiter, accounted  and  manager. we are all student now. 

We come from a total of 4 countries and represent 2 continents. America, and Asia. 3 Languages  are spoken by our group; Spanish ,Thai, and Nepali. 

The largest hometown represented. In our group is Mexico  with a population of 90000000.

The smallest hometown is Thailand of 60000.

Our marital status is varied. 2 person are married and 3 single.

3 of us live with there  family, 1 lives alone and 1 has a room mate.

The person in my group who has been in New York the longest is Santiago who came 16 years ago. By contras Em-on has been here just one month. She has been in new York  The shortest of anyone in our group and we welcome her the average length of time in New York.  We are happy and excited in this group to keep learning from each other.  

Soralla, 

Thanks for sending your article. It arrived by email. The writing is clear and mostly accurate. Problems are few and not related to grammar but spelling, which is difficult. I recommend you use the "spell check:" ("abc" above). 

Here are some spelling corrections:

tree---three

accounted--- accountant

student--- students (also "We" should have a capital "w."

"The largest hometown represented. In our group is Mexico  with a population of 90000000." This is one sentence, so there should not be a period (.) between "represented" and "group."

90000000--- 90,000,000

is Thailand of 60000--- is in Thailand with 60,0000 (it isn't Thailand but a village in Thailand. Thailand has millions of people.)

there family- their family

contras- contrast

we welcome her the average---- we welcome her. The average (new sentence begins)

These are minor mistakes. 90% is correct.